Talk:Bayern Munich signs Corentin Tolisso from Lyon

Review of revision 4323171 [Passed]

Revision 4323171 of this article has been reviewed by Acagastya (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:58, 15 June 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: thank you for the article. There are some points you can improve on: Maintain neutral tone. "Best clubs in the Europe". That was a quote and you should quote it rather than directly saying it. It was tricky to review from OLs website. And the machine translation says he joined the club at the age of 13 in 2013. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4323171 of this article has been reviewed by Acagastya (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:58, 15 June 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: thank you for the article. There are some points you can improve on: Maintain neutral tone. "Best clubs in the Europe". That was a quote and you should quote it rather than directly saying it. It was tricky to review from OLs website. And the machine translation says he joined the club at the age of 13 in 2013. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.