Talk:At least thirty dead after bus accident in India

Review of revision 1032137 [Failed]

Revision 1032137 of this article has been reviewed by Diego Grez (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:13, 30 May 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Too short. First 'paragraph' is just a sentence. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1032137 of this article has been reviewed by Diego Grez (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:13, 30 May 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Too short. First 'paragraph' is just a sentence. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

-Shrug- I would consider it long enough, the other two paragraphs are fairly long. But sure, i'll add more info. Tempodivalse [talk] 14:15, 30 May 2010 (UTC)

No rush =) --Diego Grez ^{return fire} 14:20, 30 May 2010 (UTC)

Review of revision 1032157 [Passed]

Revision 1032157 of this article has been reviewed by Diego Grez (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:21, 30 May 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: ok. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1032157 of this article has been reviewed by Diego Grez (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:21, 30 May 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: ok. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

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The Politics and conflicts category doesn't appear to be appropriate for this article, so I've removed it. Tempodivalse [talk] 14:28, 30 May 2010 (UTC)

OK. Noticed. --Diego Grez ^{return fire} 14:29, 30 May 2010 (UTC)