Talk:Arthur Ochs Sulzberger, former publisher of The New York Times, dies aged 86
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Pi zero in topic Review of revision 1645467 [Passed]
Er edit
Clearly some copyediting will be needed here; whether it's within range for an independent review is harder to say without closer scrutiny. Some points that catch the eye:
- According to his family Sulzberger had a long illness.
- One wonders when this illness was, in relation to his death.
- Sulzberger left the chief executive position and succeeded to his son
- Um. wikt:succeed.
- United States President Barack Obama said, "he was saddened by news of Sulzberger's death."
- This begs the question of who Obama was referring to when Obama said "he".
- An assistant managing editor for the New York Times, Jim Roberts said that the publisher's death is a "monumental contributor to journalism."
- Say what?
Review of revision 1645467 [Passed] edit
Revision 1645467 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:06, 2 October 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer:
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1645467 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:06, 2 October 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer:
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |