Talk:Al Jazeera cameraman dies in eastern Libya
Article has been merged with Qatari cameraman shot dead in Libya; information and sources has been added. Title has been change as the "Qatari" aspect was the least important fact, and led me to overlook the article when I was writing my own. The important point was that he worked for Al Jazeera as the rest of the article follows from that. Regards, Mattisse (talk) 03:56, 14 March 2011 (UTC)
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Revision 1194349 of this article has been reviewed by Microchip08 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 10:38, 14 March 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: "Murdered" is, of course, inherently POV, as it holds a lot of emotional weight. It's not a objective term. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1194349 of this article has been reviewed by Microchip08 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 10:38, 14 March 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: "Murdered" is, of course, inherently POV, as it holds a lot of emotional weight. It's not a objective term. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
I tried titling it "shot dead" and "killed" instead of "murdered" but the page move would not let me do it. I will try to think of another headline that does not use "murdered", "shot dead" or "killed". Do you have any ideas? Mattisse (talk) 15:12, 14 March 2011 (UTC)
- Only wording page move accepts is "died" which is unsatisfactory and doesn't convey the incident. Mattisse (talk) 15:19, 14 March 2011 (UTC)