Talk:Actress Patricia Neal dies aged 84

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Revision 1075855 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:41, 10 August 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Try not to paraphrase as much. It's okay for copyright imo, but you may see articles failed if you keep doing it; it often crosses the line. Also, if you just paraphrase, your writing will never improve. We all want our writing to improve. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1075855 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:41, 10 August 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Try not to paraphrase as much. It's okay for copyright imo, but you may see articles failed if you keep doing it; it often crosses the line. Also, if you just paraphrase, your writing will never improve. We all want our writing to improve. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.