Talk:'Enough, enough, enough, enough': 1700 women march against mass rape in DR Congo
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Revision 1115532 of this article has been reviewed by InfantGorilla (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:53, 18 October 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This difficult story doesn't get much coverage at Wikinews so I am glad Iain has tackled it. It would be helpful to have comment, or 'no comment' from the rebels and government, but given that the usual sources for synthesis news don't have this either, I don't see that Wikinews is obliged to seek such comments. The style of the headline is unusual for Wikinews, so I am not sure if it needs a colon or a comma. I stuck with the colon. The headline is, however, effective. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1115532 of this article has been reviewed by InfantGorilla (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:53, 18 October 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This difficult story doesn't get much coverage at Wikinews so I am glad Iain has tackled it. It would be helpful to have comment, or 'no comment' from the rebels and government, but given that the usual sources for synthesis news don't have this either, I don't see that Wikinews is obliged to seek such comments. The style of the headline is unusual for Wikinews, so I am not sure if it needs a colon or a comma. I stuck with the colon. The headline is, however, effective. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |