Talk:United States celebrates Earth Day in 2024
Making better sources after adding categories, sources, and styles in news page edit
Making the better sources after adding categories, sources, and styles in Earth Day-only news page. 199.212.250.163 (talk) 17:25, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Making the mistake after added more sources and styles in Earth Day-only news page edit
Making mistakes with the edits being fixed in styles but sources has a mistake. Editing added sources and styles and revising with edits in Earth Day-only news page. 199.212.250.163 (talk) 17:40, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Minimal article edit
This article is a single sentence of "content" that is nonsensical. The limited list of US states provides no context, especially given the statement regarding other countries as well as the White House. Are those states listed the only ones that observe Earth Day? The other sentences amount to 'see also...' and provide little-to-no context.
The article should be expanded and the style guide must be followed. Particularly how to link sources (rather than in-line, in paragraphs, with the full URL visible): Wikinews:Style_guide#Linking_sources
Michael.C.Wright (Talk/Published) 17:53, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Removing minimal article and revise again edit
Removing minimal article and revise again with the same template. 2607:FEA8:1F1D:8400:D57E:5A2E:FA7A:B3C6 (talk) 19:31, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- Largely speaking: This article is not improving very much.--Bddpaux (talk) 19:42, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Review of revision 4777236 [Not ready] edit
Revision 4777236 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:42, 22 April 2024 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This might be the beginning something, but it is NOWHERE NEAR READY for publication.--Bddpaux (talk) 19:42, 22 April 2024 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 4777236 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:42, 22 April 2024 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This might be the beginning something, but it is NOWHERE NEAR READY for publication.--Bddpaux (talk) 19:42, 22 April 2024 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revised when adding additional sources and styles edit
Revised when adding additional sources and styles in Earth Day-only news page. 199.212.250.163 (talk) 14:20, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
Review of revision 4777403 [Not ready] edit
Revision 4777403 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:36, 25 April 2024 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Needs major work...sorry. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 4777403 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:36, 25 April 2024 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Needs major work...sorry. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
No content edit
This article contains no meaningful or newsworthy content. It has been reviewed twice and has failed twice. It has not been materially improved since the first review. If one removes all sentences that are "see also" or 'for more information + URL' statements, one is left with no meaningful content. It reads and feels like vandalism. I think its time to delete it. Michael.C.Wright (Talk/Published) 00:01, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Michael.C.Wright agreed. BigKrow (talk) 00:26, 27 April 2024 (UTC)