Talk:Seven sentenced to death for Jordanian suicide attacks
Latest comment: 17 years ago by Apartmento2 in topic Editorial cleanup
Editorial cleanup edit
I'm not sure exactly what needs to be cleaned up. It says 'article structure & fragmented sentences' but I have no idea what's wrong with the article. I have changed the paragraph order and added a new bit of information and made some small changed to existing information since the tag was placed there but it is essentially the same article. I don't understand why my sentences a 'fragmented' or my article structure bad. Please explain. --Apartmento2 00:11, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
I can't see anything wrong with this article and I'm planning to remove the editorial cleanup tag and publish it at 1200 UTC if noone has any objections . --Apartmento2 05:45, 23 September 2006 (UTC)