Talk:Red Arrows pilot killed at 2011 Bournemouth air display

Review of revision 1275496 [Failed]

Revision 1275496 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:27, 20 August 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: Too short. At least three paragraphs. The headline is generic and therefore unacceptable; see WN:SG#Headlines. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1275496 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:27, 20 August 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: Too short. At least three paragraphs. The headline is generic and therefore unacceptable; see WN:SG#Headlines. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1275649 [Passed]

Revision 1275649 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:28, 20 August 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1275649 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:28, 20 August 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.