Talk:France fears serial killer responsible for recent murders

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Per Wikinews' style guide, articles should be a minimum of three paragraphs, presented in w:Inverted pyramid structure, and use w:active voice.

It is also recommended, to speed the review process, that you include html comments marking facts and quotes in the article with a note of which specific source they are taken from. Thanks for any help you can give in making reviewing easier! --Brian McNeil / ^talk 12:48, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

The paragraphs are not in Wikinew style. Look at other examples, like Last Ottoman dies, aged 91. Short paragraphs is a relative term per medium and outlet. In magazine writing, you always look at the style of the organization. It's a good approach in general when you move from one style to another. Crtew (talk) 15:14, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

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Revision 1463837 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:54, 9 April 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The more unlike the sources, the better; the information is from the sources, but the choice of facts and their presentation are all yours to use to best effect. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.